Language Resident/Assistant Name:
Kozue Matsumoto
Day and Date:
Monday October 5, 2020
Language and Level (intermediate or advanced class):
Intermediate / Advanced
Class theme/topics discussed:
- Haiku
Goal of the class:
- Learn about Haiku
- Create haiku and kigo
How did you structure the class?
- Good news (5min) *We share positive stories at the beginning of each class.
- Today’s plan and watch a video: https://youtu.be/BNyPE93fXh8 (10 min)
- Example of “kigo” https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_kigo#Autumn:_8_August_%E2%80%93_6_November (5 min)
- Break out room (2-3people) (25 min)
- How we appreciate season? Any new “kigo” that we can create that’s specific to American seasonal moments?
- What reminds us of seasons? What kind of things do we appreciate in a season? What do we do, see, hear, taste or feel in a season?
- Let’s make a haiku!
- Main room (15 min)
- Share the haiku each group made.
What technology, media or props did you use? (internet resources, playmobiles, handouts, etc.)
Class agreement, breakup rooms
Zoom, Breakout room, emails, YouTube and internet resources.
What worked well in this class? What did not work?
- They knew the basics of haiku. The video helped them understand a little deeper about haiku.
- “kigo” is an interesting concept. Instead of telling them this as a rule, I let them think about and come up with their own “kigo” in their own environment (American or California or whatever they think of)
- I believe it’s a nice activity to reflect how we are related to our environment, such as nature or seasonal events.
- This also turned into finding a little nice or memorable moment in their daily life relating to a season
- They enjoyed thinking of “kigo” and they explained how seasonal a certain word is to me, as I’m not quite familiar to American seasonal practice.
- They enjoyed making haiku, too, and they are using some techniques such as ji-amari (extra letter) or taigen-dome (ending a phrase with a noun)
- I also had them type their poem into the chat so I can make sure I know what they did and also I can save it.
- This was also finding a little nice or memorable moment in their daily life
How could this class be improved/ modified?
- We focused on fall as it’s fall now, but we can do this any seasons
- We can also do “senryu,” which is like haiku, but you do not need to use “kigo” in it. So this could be a little freer and more hilarious.
If you have a more detailed lesson plan, please attach it below (OK to use target language for that). Please attach any handouts as well.
Some concepts:
俳句、季語、字余り、字足らず、倒置法
Student works (with my quick translation):
天の川(あまのがわ)
今晩月は(こんばんつきは)
珍しい(めずらしい)
With Milky way, tonight’s moon is rare.
紅葉狩り
カリフォルニアで
火事がある
While enjoying the colorful fall tree leaves while it’s on fire in California
コーン畑
踊って来てる
骸骨は
At Corn field, a skeleton is coming while dancing
花枯れる (はなかれる)
BTS が来る (ビティエスがくる)
うれしいな
The season the flowers die, it’s also a season BTS comes here. Feels happy.
タコ火曜
感謝祭と
食べすぎる
Taco Tuesday, also Thanksgiving, I’m eating too much
秋のくれ(あき)
カボチャをほって
光入れ(ひかりいれ)
At dusk, I curve a pumpkin and light inside.
秋の時間
色々な色
思い出す
Fall time, I remember lots of colors.
秋に来る
外を見る時
しあわせな
Coming in the fall, I feel happy looking outside
春寒のころ
電車を待ち中
あの子見た
In early spring, while waiting for a train, I saw the girl.
宿題が
飛んで行ってる
貝寄風のおかげ
My homework is all blown away, thanks to a strong spring wind!
蝉の音
種を吐き出せ
ネバネバな手
Cicada sounds, let’s spit out seeds with my sticky hands
最初の雨
上に雪が降る
山眠る
The first rain, and then snow falls, the mountain sleeps
大雨で 峰
白くなり
山眠る
A huge rain fall, the peak of mountains become white as mountains sleeps
雨の後
雲吹き飛ばし
白い山
After the rain, the clounds are blown away and I see a white mountain.